martes, 20 de mayo de 2008

Argumentative essay: Ivonne

DEATH PENALTY

Have you ever thought about whether the person next to you is a murderer or a rapist? If he is, what he would like the government if he had killed someone you know? Following the death penalty in our society is not humane, but do not help the problem and not give relief to the victims' families, who had to go through an event like the assassination.

Firstly, people should know the history of the death penalty. The first legal executions came to the United States was during the Revolutionary War against Britain. British soldiers hung the first person to die with the death penalty, Nathan Hale for spying (Farrell). The reason that I included this story is to show that if something has been working, why stop this working.Some of people said that sending the murderers to death row is inhumane because these people deserve the right to live. This is true because they have the right to live but have committed the heinous and horrible crimes.

It has also been the problem of overcrowding in prisons and jails. Some people say that this is a problem but have built more prisons will solve this problem. Once more prisons or jails built to help solving the problem, but the death penalty effectively stops draining more money from taxpayers to house murderers. These murderers get three hot meals a day, doing nothing all day long, and have a place to sleep only because taxpayers finance these facilities. Murderers sentenced to death does not deserve to get a place to stay. They deserve to get their lives away from them because of the heinous crimes that these criminals have done.

Many people say that the death penalty does not help because there are not enough people being executed. A major way in which the death penalty contributes to the family could exempt if someone is killed and convicted criminals were put to death. A perfect example was when Timothy McVeigh was put to death in 2001, which was the first execution since 1963 (CNN.com). The death penalty is good because prisoners who deserve to be killed, must be killed. This is a circular argument, which is a logical fallacy. A circular argument is when someone comes to a conclusion, because it is true for not demonstrated by the facts, in other words, the argument is pursuing its own tail. I think if people are only happens in a circular argument then there is no way that people gain ground to get rid of the death penalty.

In conclusion, this process is not humane and persons performing this task are playing another role asecinos. In the Bible, God said that the people must uphold the law (Holy Bible), but not in the same way as the damage. In the future, many problems could be resolved thereby remove the death penalty.

Argumentative essay: Luz D

SEPTEMBER THE 11th IN UNITED STATES
This essay is about the September the 11th in United States, I am not only talk about the bad things of things, also I write some thing that this produced in this country. when I think about America, I think about freedom. Generations over generations have lost their lives to protect this land. We cherish peace and freedom as our most valuable possessions which nobody can take away from us. But they did on September the 11th 2001, in New York City, killing thousands of innocent people from around the world. The only way to prevent this from happening again in the United States and in the world is to end the terrorism, supported by countries like Iraq. The United States should declare war on Iraq because we can not have an encore of September the 11th, also countries like Iraq support and encourage international terrorism, and there will always be the biological, chemical and nuclear weapons of mass destruction threatening our peace.

On the other hand, President Bush declared Iraq's weapons program a "grave and growing" threat to the United States. The only way to end the evil in the world is by destroying the evil itself. Are we ready to let that happen again in our country and around the world? Are we ready to loose our parents or children today? If not, we have to take action, today before we get the change to regret it. Iraq is one of the countries that cherish the power to control the world and not freedom and peace. The WTC, two of the tallest buildings in the world were erased of the face of the earth. A mass destruction with a lot of suffering lest behind. From what we know from the media, Iraq owns more weapons of mass destruction than what has been declared.

Furthermore, the United States should declare was on Iraq to prevent an encore of September the 11th, also to end the support of Iraq in international terrorism, and to disarm the president of the illegal biological, chemical and nuclear weapons of mass destruction which prove to be an endless threat of the peace of world. This only means that Iraq has been supporting terrorist groups over the years and will continue to do so in the future. He said that Iraq "had stockpiled biological and chemical weapons in defiance of the United Nations and was rebuilding facilities to make more. The Pentagon, the brain of the US army, was attacked and damaged. We can't play with country like Iraq. They proved what they can do in our country with our technology and our people. The only way we can win this war is attack or get ready to be attacked.

In conclusion, this is the most terrible event in this country because the attack of September the 11th was an attack on the United States of America and the entire world. On the planes, at WTC and Pentagon, were people working hard, doing their job. None of them knew that was the last day of their lives. Thousands of children lost their parents and thousands of mothers and fathers lost their only child that more.

lunes, 19 de mayo de 2008

Ivonne essay

EXERCISE IN OUR HEALTHY
The porpuse of this write is to discuss the importance of exercise in youradsolute health (mental, social, and physical). If you are not well in one of three parts, you are not completely healthy. Exercising is a free time activity that helps people to feel good in every aspect of the health definition.

First of all, the best know part that exercising improves is the physical part, due to the physical effect of exercising is that every part and system of our body is in continue movement. Thus, there are many parts in our body that benefict from exercise, but one of the most important parts that exercising helps is the cardiovascular system. Consequently the heart has to pump blood in a faster rhythm to keep the muscles moving.

On the other hand, another part of the definition of health is mental health. This aspect is one of the aspects that makes people exercise. If you make exercise then you distracts and relaxes for a while because in your exercise, you are discharging many feelings and incommodities, such as stress.
Many people feel that exercising, all the problems and pressures of their lifestyle or at least are forgotten. consequenly, while exercising problems of our lives can be solved because you are calm and relaxed, and it is just much easier to think clearly.

Besides, the social aspects of health is helped with exercise because many of the sports are or can be made someone else. Probably this makes stronger relations ships, due to you meet people that are like you and share the same things.

In conclusion, exercising is an activity that touyches the three aspects of health. By exercising you could improve the functioning of your body, be calm in your mind, and meet new people which made a healthier life. You should try it. Exercise, and be healthy.

Raised By: Ivonne Cardenas♥

Ivonne essay

AZTEC AND MAYA RELIGIONS

The best know of Central American Indias is the Aztec and Maya. The soceity of the Aztec and Maya held religion to the utmost highest priority. Aztec and Mayan religious practices were unique and sometimes barbaric. From daily rituals to elaborate ceremonies dedicated to the worship of deities the Aztec and Maya were ensconced in their religion. Aztec and Mayan religious zeal indirectly contributed to their demise.

The main similiraty betwen the two societies shared the same god. Both regardless of who was chosen it was of the highest honor to be sacrificed.Tezcatlipoca was said to be a magic and an omniscient god, most likely the chief of the active gods. One similiratyu of the gods that the Maya were most concerned about appeasing was Itzamma, the father of the gods, who can be related to the Aztec`s Huitzilopochtl. On the other hand, the Maya,like the Aztecs, believed tht their world would end with earthquakes. Therefore, they were extremely concerned with keeping these and the other gods of their pantheon.


Nevertheless, there are some conspicuous differents The aztecs, who arrived in central Mexico central in the twelfth century A.D, borrowed many of their religious ideas from the Toltecs, whilst, the Aztecs differed from these earlier cultures in that they were far more bloodthirsty and warlike. It can be seen that the Aztecs placed a great deal of faith in their gods. In addition other differences is that the belief the Maya to always serve the needs of their godsa in order to keep the gods from becoming aroused.

In summary, Aztec and Mayan religious practices are very the same, perhaps we can see just as many similarities.
Raised By: Ivonne Cardenas.

Ivonne essay

EFFECTS ABOUT HAVING FRIENDS AT WORK.


The purpose of this essay is write about the effects of having the work for your motivation in this, knowing that the work is an aspect that you need for the live.
We may, then be safe from or at least reduce the adverse psychological and physical effect thus that you don´t have motivation or friends.
First of all, one of psychological effects, in your motivation is that if you have friends in your work you are very happy, then attitude is possitive and your jod will be more quiet and relaxing.
Another aspect is that your relation ship will be very good, as a result that you don´nt have worry and you will have open mind for that you will done a good jod.
On the other hand, the motivation affects the part physical, certainly if you do´nt have motivation your defence down, consequenly you health wo´nt the best. For this reasonif you will have good health and your body will be very well because you can work.
In conclusion, if we have friends in our work the motivation will be very good and will be well of body and mind, because, you will do a good jod.


Raised by: Ivonne Cardenas♥

Ivonne essay

ANCIENT CIVILIZATIONES AZTECS AND INCAS


The purpose of this essay is to discuss about many civilizations arising in souht america and mexico, but two could be compared the best contributions the Aztec and Inca in our nowadays. Although both groups are still very similar and different by their daily life, science and learning and decline.

Firstly, the Aztecs were wandering warriors, while the Incas were more organized. Thus in their society the emperor ruled as an autocrat but used his power to improve the impere. Instead the Aztec increased their power until they dominated all of central mexico were ataacados consequently when they captured to someone they were very cruel.

On the other hand, the aztes were very inteligent and developed a calendar and mathematicas, there fore , these instruments are very useful and help us to lead a life more organized today century XXI. Undoutedly, the Incas learned more things that were beneficial to the people of their soceity. As a result the medicine and use of anesthetics and performing operation on the brain.
Although, the decline of both of these civilizations is similar. They created road system that basically unified the empire. Besides if they established a very affective education system then they not a writing systems but a way to remember things called the quipu. Equally, the aztecs learned techniques of working with gold and silver, weaving, and how to make pottery. The aztecs built causeways , temples, marketplaces, and palaces, for this reason, these are very visit because are beautiful arquitectura that increase the turist in Mexico. Other aspec is the language, hhe spanish explorers conquered both the Aztec and Inca society. The Inca´s have an Incan language, wich is know as Quechua and is spoken in Peru and mexico nowadays.

In conclusión, these civilization formed the traditions and customs of the South Americans, if they had not created such wonderful things our world completely different.

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Luz Dary Essay

HOW HAVING FRIENDS AT WORK POSTIVELY AFFECTS YOUR MOTIVATION AT WORK




This essay is about causes and effects at how having friends at work positively affects your motivation at work. I don’t only write to causes and effects I am write some advice for your life.First of all, it is very important that you have friends at work because you have a motivation to go to work is possible that you do your work very well, Furthermore when you have any problem in your work, you can to give a solution to this when you have friends, because your friends can give you some advice to your problem.On the other hand, having friends at work is also bad because when you have friends is possible that you don’t do your work of the best form, as a result you can have problems with your boss, for this reason my advice is when you have a good friend you need care of he and help him.In conclusion, it is very important that have friends at work because is a good motivation to go to work but is more important that your friends help you to improve in your life. The best friend is not who invite you to party; It is who help you when have problems.

Luz Dary Essay

CAUSE AND EFFECTS OF SMOKING


This essay is about cause and effects of smoking, I am not only going to explain the health risks liked to smoking but I am also going to cover diseases that smoking causes, and the benefits of giving up smoking.First of all, nowadays smoking is more and more common in many universities, and different places of the world. People like smoking when feel different sensations for example: cold, heat etc.If you don’t know by now that smoking causes cancer you may have been hiding under a rock for many time. Furthermore, cigarette smoking is the major single cause of cancer mortality in the world. Unquestionably cigarette smoking contributing cause in the development of cancers of the bladder, pancreas, uterine, stomach, and some leukemiasFinally, lug cancer is the leading cause of cancer deaths in both women and men around the world for this reason the better way is not smoking because cause many problems not only in the health also in the planet.

Luz Essay

TRANSMILENIO




Transmilenio is a middle public transport, that across all Bogotá city. This transport system was creative seven years ago for give solution of the problems of transportation in Bogotá helped to arrive master to all places. Undoubtedly, people need to arrive punctually to work, to study or a interview. Due to this situation is necessary a middle transport that avoids traffic like trasmilenio. Equally important to time is the money. For example when people go to work in the car, spend more money in gasoline that the people that go to trasnmilenio, that only need $ 2.800.However, not all is god. Normally when you have to go to work is very difficult to find a transmilenio with enough space; consequently you spend more time waiting another one.In conclusion, transmilenio have more good thing that bad things, because although in the morning is full, helps to arrive early, to spare money and time. Furthermore, transmilenio helps to reduce the pollution, hut is important in the future will create another massive transport as s subway, for reduce more pollution.

Luz Essay

INCA AND AZTEC CIVILIZATIONS





This essay is about compare contrast the Aztec and the Inca civilizations. The Inca and the Aztec were alike in some ways but also have very large differences.First of all, in the Inca civilization had an advanced agriculture system, they would carve steps out of a hill and then would plant vegetables such as corn, beans, and squash, they also had an advanced agricultural system. They used floating gardens called chinampas which were rafts made of reeds which soil was put onto and then seeds were planted in it. This way the could have more land for farming. Also is very important know that the Spanish explorer conquered both the Aztec and Inca society. The Incas have an Incan language, which is which is know as quechua. Nevertheless, there are some differences between culture Inca and Aztec for example; the Aztec were more organized. In while the Incas were more organized. In the Inca society the emperor ruled as a autocrat but used his power to improve the empire. The Aztec increased their power until they dominated all of the Mexico. And when they captures a they developed calendar mathematics. The Incas learned more things that were beneficial to the people of their society.In summary, the Aztec and Inca groups are still very similar and different by their daily life, science and learning and decline.